Thursday, May 5, 2016

Second Part of Narrative



            He was growing up and now he is on junior high school in 2nd grade. Oneday, he had a Biology test. He did not study about it because he felt, he would be able to pass this test. The test day has come. As usual, he woke up and took a shower and had a breakfast with his parents. His parents asked him, “Have you studied for the test today?”. He answered, “Not yet, dad-mom. I have not studied about the test yet. However, I’m sure, I will pass this test”. His father replied, “Are you sure, boy?. I dont want you get a bad score”. Finally, Paijo still tried to convince his parents until finally, his parents believed him.
            He went to school and met his friends. One of his friends pointed him and said, “ The smart boy has come. For all of you, if you have any difficulties about the test today, just ask him”. Many friends asked him about the materials for the test that day, and fortunately, he could answer all of his friends question. Finally, the time is for biology lesson, and it means, the test will start soon. Paijo still felt relax and was confident about the test. The students were doing the test, including Paijo. He was doing the test as soon as possible. He was the student who submitted the work earlier than his friends. The teacher asked him, “Are you sure with this work?”. Paijo answered, “Yes, why not? I am completely sure”. The time for the test has finished and the teacher told the class, “The result will be announced next week. So, make sure that all of you come to receive the result”. After that day, Paijo did the following day as usual and he still did not feel afraid of his test.
*1 week left*
            The teacher of Biology came and sat on her chair. She held the paper of the students’s test which have been corrected by her and said to the students, “Class, this is your result of the test last week. I shocked to see 1 score. He usually is not like this. However, i don’t know why in this test, he can get this score”. Finally, the teacher shared the result. Surprisingly, Paijo get 50 for the test and Paijo was shocked too. When Paijo went home, he was afraid of his parents because of the score. When he arrived at home, his parents asked him, “How was your biology test’s score?”. He replied, “Sorry, dad-mom. I just got 50”. His parents were angry with him and said, “Hmmmm. What i said boy!!. Don’t underestimate anything!!. Everything needs proccess and you dont underestimate anything. Although it is or it was a small thing, keep studying and trying”. Paijo said, “Yes, dad. I am sorry to make you angry and sad about my score. I will try to not repeat it again. I will never underestimate everything, although it is a small thing. Thank you, dad for giving me an advice”.

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  2. Such a good story for upcoming writing competition though.. Also your story is very predictable. I'm pretty sure your story will be winning the competition! Yet there are few things for you to keep up your writing skill: Practicing, pay attention to details, don't forget about grammatical use, punctuation, and capitalized letters! Keep up your good work!

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