Thursday, April 28, 2016

First part of Narrative

Long Life Education

          Once upon a time, there was a smart boy named Paijo. He was from a poor family, which his father worked as a carpenter and his mother worked as a very kind housewife. He was born in Tabor Village on 26th of September 1970.
            One day, when he had his breakfast before going to school, his parents came and sat next to him. His father spoke with him. “Hello son! How are you today? Are you ready to do and face this day?” asked his father. He answered, “I am fine and so thankful today and yeah, I am ready to do and face this day”. His mother smiled and said, “Yeah that is my son. You have to be thankful for everything that you have gotten and also you have to have enthusiasm to do all day”. He said, “Yes mom!. Thank you for remembering me. Dad-mom, it is time to go to school. I have to go now”. After having conversation with his parents, Paijo went to school.
            When arrived in school, Paijo met his friends. “Have you studied for english test today?” asked one of his friend to him. Paijo answered “Yes, I have studied about it. It is very easy I think”. His friend shocked when heard Paijo’s opinion about the english test today and asked “Are you sure? This test is very easy? Okay then, please teach me about it. I am still confused about what is the difference between narrative and recount”. Paijo taught his friend about his friend’s difficulty. Finally, the test started and all of the students did the test silently. Apparently, the teacher looked into the tests and gave a score on it. After giving the score, the teacher told the class about the score. Paijo got a good score, 100. He was very happy and thankful to see the score. When Paijo went home, he told his parents about it and his parents felt so happy and so thankful too. His parents told Paijo, “We are so proud of you. However, don’t forget to thank to God for your good score”. Paijo answered, “Ofcourse mom-dad. I will thank to God for my good score”.

2 comments:

  1. So far your story is very good and no conflict is found. and about grammar its very consistent.

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  2. Your story is interesting and your grammar is good.
    But, I can't find the climax of the story. Thanks :)

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